Haiku Writing Roundtable--Kukai 2, PACE June 2005
summer
thunderstorm I see a small child tucked into bed and kissed goodnight after a bedtime story. There is a warm breeze coming from the bedroom window, but suddenly it starts to rain and the window has to be closed. Lightening and thunder seem to come from nowhere and the rain is beating hard against the bedroom window. The child becomes frightened, and the parent assures there is nothing to be afraid of. The parent leaves the room, and the child is finally assured that there is nothing to fear, when suddenly lightening hits casting a shadow of the big oak on the childs wall, resembling a hideous monster with tentacles. Instead of two in the master bedroom, it was three that night! Becky |
lilies
bloom |
dark
cold night |
one eye
staring |
brisk
fall morning |
soothing
hum sound Linda Hayes (2) |
outside
the kid's window Patti Freimuth (7) |
cold
winter evening |
hot and
muggy day Shawn Guise (3) This person is revisiting her childhood. This is a fun memory at the amusement park which involves the entire family. It may have been a hot humid afternoon, but it did not stop this fun filled adventure. Snow cones never tasted better and cotton candy flavored the taste buds. The roller coasters provided excitement and adventure. Full of laughs, smiles, and memories, this retreat brought the family together even when the weather was oppressive. Keith |
black
velvet sky |
Winter
zero below |
hot bright
sun |
fire
aglow The story of this haiku, as I see it, is about a man and a woman who are enjoying a quiet evening together before he leaves on his tour of duty overseas. As they sit by the warm fireplace their souls are entwined in the moment. The logs are burning slowly and the embers twinkle like stars. The two are sharing memories from the past, while leaving out any questions for the future. Departure time is at daybreak, this kiss must last forever. Tena This haiku reminds me of two lovers sitting together looking in each others eyes. They dont have a care in the world and can care less about whats going on in the world. As they kiss, they realize how much they mean to each other. Time has stopped for this couple and they are enjoying every moment of the frozen moment. Shawn |
poolside
screams Bruce Nielsen (3) I love this haiku because it makes me realize that I am not alone. My mom and dad have a pool and every Sunday we go over for Sunday dinner. In the summer on Sundays the pools filled with people. There are the few adults that like to lie on the raft and not get wet like myself, the other adults that are in the water cooling off and then there are the KIDS. They have the best time in the pool playing games, swimming and going down the slide. However, they do not like it when I am in the pool lying on the raft. Before I can get wet the temperature has to be at least over 90, because of this I am always yelling at them to not splash me or settle down because I dont want to get wet or heaven forbid my hair gets messed up. My daughter is always quick to tell me that the pool is made for splashing and getting wet as they continue to play. Michelle |
hot summer
day |
bare
branches show |
walking
through fresh snow |
with
fireplace aglow Diane Reasoner (7) |
looking
out my window Michelle Dalluge (3) This haiku reminds me of growing up in the projects of Chicago, IL. I was raised in a religious family so it was hard for me to have friends. Grow up in the projects were gang violence and drug dealers was the lime life of my neighborhood. I could never go outside to play as a kid due to the drive by shootings. All summer I spent my time either reading the Bible or watching other children play out doors. Josh I expressed my thoughts on this one to the whole class, because I have a very sweet, sensitive, quiet, well behaved Mamas Boy. But, his father taught him this and by my child doing this I realize..He is all boy. He pulls the butt(light) off of the bug, and paints the concrete, his hands, or he just brings the bright green streaks into the house for me to see. He really thinks I am going to enjoy this as much as he does. Jaylen |
jack-o-lantern
in the window Becky Voigt (4) |
birds
speak to each other Diane Reasoner |
country
road to camp Bruce Nielsen (3) I chose this haiku to represent the word links. It speaks of driving down a country road. You can hear the gravel snap beneath the tire wich is on the country road. This haiku is all about focusing on the road to camp. It all links together. Crystal |
crowd
roars Bruce Nielsen |
bright
light Bruce Nielsen (2) |
on the
beach a falling star Tena Myers (6) |
snow
sparkling Bryan Williams (2) |
lightning
flashes Joe Walters (5) This haiku reminds me of when I was a single mom and it was just the 4 of us. We would always protect one another, and they always look to me to protect them, so anytime when just one of them would hear the slightest sound at night they would sneak into my room and climb in bed with me for protection. I can remember many thunder and lightening storms when one by one they would come into my room and pile into my bed hiding under my covers. This brought back many fond memories of my girls when they were little and those same memories keep us all very close today. Linda I also expresses this one to the class. My children and I are petrified of the dark. So, we sleep with the hallway light on and have nightlights in every room of the house except for the kitchen ( I like to keep them out of there). One night when I was living alone with them there was a pretty rough storm going on outside. Lightening was crashing and the thunder was pretty fierce, but, my children werent scared, although the noises woke them up, what made them scream, and claw at my neck was the fact that the power had gone out, and all the nightlights and the hallway light were out. Jaylen |
steamy
day |
leaves
falling from above |
first
day of summer |
a warm
autumn night |
colorful
leaves Lori Baitto (3) |
air-conditioned
building Tena Myers |
cornfield
in a blanket |
grandmas
raking party Bryan Williams |
almost
dusk This reminds me of when we used to light sparklers as a child on the Fourth of July. The sparklers we used to have had a metal wire with flammable material pressed around them. I can picture the figure eights and circles that we would make. Of course, us boys always had to have a miniature flaming sword fight too. I can smell the smoke rolling off the sparkler and the light was so bright that there was always a bright spot, when I closed my eyes, that would stick with me long after the sparkler was gone. The big show in the sky would start and all of the sparklers would fade away as they were not quite the attraction that they once were earlier in the day. Bruce |
Christmas
bulbs |
winter
sidewalks Becky Voigt (4) |
hot blistering
sun Keith Campbell (5) This haiku reminded me of my summers growing up at my parents home on the dead end street. Since we did not live on a main road, our road had tar on it instead of nice blacktop pavement or concrete. The tar machine would come down our road and coat the street with the thick black tar about once every couple of years. On hot sunny days I would go out to the street and pop the tar bubbles with a stick or my fingers. It really was fun, how many could I pop? The smell of the oil would remain on my fingers and I would put them up to my nose and sniff. Why I do not know??? I didnt mind the summer heat while I was popping the bubbles, perhaps because of my love of numbers. Counting the bubbles was fun. Kathi |
paddling
a canoe Deb Lehman (3) |
ice covered
trees Kathi Overheul (2) I picture branches weighted down with the ice that covers them. They glisten in the sunlight but the way the branches hang takes away the beauty of their sparkle. Inside there is a warm fire glowing in the fireplace. Although the fire warms your body from the harsh elements of the world around you it cannot lift your spirits. I myself have felt this way the past few Christmases sitting by my grandmothers fireplace. It seems that so many people have forgotten the true meaning of Christmas. Patti |
Christmas
lights flashing |
grilling
out |
first
snow |
waves
rolling against the boat |
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