hot summer
day Cassandra Long |
my shadow
and I Nova Spence I
know this poem was probably written by a female, but I think even men
can relate to playing alone with they were boys. When I was a child, I
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on a shelf Patti Freimuth |
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fireworks
at dusk Michelle Dalluge This haiku remind me of a childhood memory growing up in Chicago, IL. My mother would take my twin sister and me down town to the taste of Chicago. The taste of Chicago bought in hundreds of people and vender to celebrate Independents day. There was always entertainment, food, carnival rides and last but not least the fireworks show down. For me the fire works was all the enjoyment I needed at that particular time. Still to this day, I am always trying to make plans to go to the taste of Chicago, in July for the fireworks show down. Josh |
screaming
for mom Tena Myers I love this haiku, because it makes me think of a time when I was fifteen babysitting for our neighbors. The two little girls were four and six. I had just fixed them lunch, and the four year old wanted to go out in the backyard and play on the swing set. I let her take a slice of bologna with her. A few minutes later I heard her screaming, and ran outside to find her hanging on for dear life from the monkey bars with the bologna hanging from her mouth with about five dogs nipping at her feet. I sort of see the same scenario in the haiku, but the lunch meat is missing! Becky I like this haiku you really visualize a kid hanging on a close line calling out to his mom. This haiku makes me think of times when I was a little girl, running around playing with my dog. Cassandra After reading this haiku, I found the image to be quite funny. Here you have a child messing around in the backyard using a clothes line as monkey bars. While messing around, the child some how gets tangled and stuck in the wires. Now, the child is screaming for mom. The dog senses the child is in trouble; so its nipping at the childs toes trying to pull him/her down to safety. Finally, I can just imagine the look on the mothers face. Keith |
I'm running away. Jaylen Nicole |
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a lazy
hammock Bryan Williams This haiku reminds me of Saturday afternoon after a hard week at work. I do not want to talk on the phone or do any chores. I only want to sleep on my hammock and enjoy the day, because I know Monday morning will be here before I know it. The shade is the only friend I want to be with or talk to at the moment. |
lazy
afternoon Lori Baietto |
county
fair Becky Voight This haiku reminded me of my grandson Alex who is 22 months. I took him to the Macon county fair this year which was his first fair. He was so excited with the atmosphere. We stopped by the sheep area, so he could see one up close, he didnt care for that at all. Next we thought we would find a small ride for him to get on. We found a kids ride that had an airplane, mustang car and so on. So I put him into it and buckled him in the ride and the ride started very slowly and he began to scream! I took a couple of pictures of him crying, and took him out. The fair guy felt so bad he handed me my tickets back and said dont worry about it. The only thing that calmed him down was some cotton candy and wiping it all over grandmas clothes (which that night I had a lovely white shirt on). The rest of the night he was just fine in my arms as long as we didnt put him on another ride! Oh well better luck next year. Linda This haiku starts with all kinds of sights, smells, tastes and sounds bringing all of the senses right into the picture with just the opening two words county fair. The rides are everywhere and I picture myself standing right in the middle of them. As I walk away from the games and rides, I can picture myself heading toward food ally. On the way, I can hear the announcer at the grandstand and the screams of children on rides combined with the cheers of the crowd enjoying a show. After sitting down to some greasy carnival food, the kind that you must have but pay for the rest of the night, I watch the kids smiling with cotton candy in hand. Trying their best not to get messy, however no matter how good of a job they do, the warm humid air dampens their hands making the mess they tried to avoid inevitable. Bruce |
popcorn
in a sack Keith Campbell Buttery popcorn scent fills the air. Dad has just made the family microwave popcorn for our weekend movie. We did not have a lot of money when I was younger so going to an outdoor movie in the car would be out of the question. Packing the five of us on the couch for a Saturday night television movie was our special treat! My baby brother would fall asleep before the movie was over and my sister and I would giggle and talk throughout the movie driving my dad crazy. Popcorn always without fail reminds me of my father. To this day I believe he eats popcorn nearly every night while watching TV after supper. I realize this haiku spoke of a car and being outdoors, but my car was the couch and the outdoors was our living room and the special time my dad made for us on Saturday nights. Kathi I like this haiku because it takes me back to my childhood. I would help my mom fix a huge brown paper grocery bag full of popcorn. The whole family would snuggle up with blankets and pillows across the bed in the back of our open van to watch the movie. I can remember how crummy the sound was from those tiny speakers but we had a great time. One of the things I like about how this is written is that you can picture the people in the car exactly as the popcorn all sitting beside, on top of, in front of each other, just everywhere!You can also picture the stars in the sky and the breeze blowing over you. Patti This
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on the
deck Crystal Swaim |
big bubble
gum bubble Alec Le Feur |
spring
day Josh Guise |
little
red car Crystal Swaim |
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Randy Brooks Millikin University
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